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Perfect Time For Suicide..
a panoramic sunset
on an afternoon
by the beach
watching the waves
kiss the sand
in a rhythmic motion
of making love
soothing
relaxing
liberating
me from all
that has filled
whats remained
of my sanity
fulfilling
controlling
pacifying
every bit of rage
and hate
and bitterness
now im watching
the birds
flying free
spirit-like
carefree
god mode
a peculiar rush
of envy comes
a cry for freedom
a downsurge of
pressure coming down
on me and now...
a sudden desire
for liberation
a perfect time
to end it all.
or to begin again... your vision too sharp to quit. remarkable writing here... have felt this way myself a lot lately... you get to the depths of the soul. eric
wow, really moving words, makes you think a lot...personally, i like it a lot
i totally feel this, totally get this....sometimes things are just too beautiful...so perfect, and why ruin that by continuing? i've had this. terrific imagery, terrific poem. allison