'my love for you shall never end'
i always used to say
never knowing what will happen in the future
never knowin how you would make me feel one day
YOU FUCKING KILLED ME!!
i hope your happy now
and that you had fun with that stupid cow
you know how much youv destroyed my life
you killed me with a fuckin knife
i thought you loved me but you didnt
i thought you could help me but you couldnt
i hope your happy now
I really liked this poem. Actually I don't believe I've read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you don't mind I'd really appreciate it if you would look at my poems, give me your oppinions about them and give me some pointers to improve my writing.
very very powerful well done miss jasmine:)