i cant remember how it started
it might have been a candle
though whatever it was
i almost lost my life
my neighbors called my name
the smoke was just too much
one man said he'd call for help
i was so relieved
maybe this was it
maybe i was free
they couldnt save my house
but maybe they could save me
my life flashed before me
as i lay on the burning steps
finally i see them
the firemen are here
what i used to call home
now burned to ashy soot
windows are shattered
but im alright
thank you firemen
for saving my life
hey janelle i like that poem is good you should check out sum of mine ya kno... also go to poetry.com type in tory snavley he wrote a new poem recently and i want you to check it out and tell me what u think?