Clad in your summer sun-dress, and dark tights; shoeless, you walk through the park, transforming my world, my poems, liking the way it suits you.
Kyakuchuu
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The letter form in prose poetry is wonderful. The succinctness of this one is delightful - Lady A
Not sure I understand the first sentence in your comment, but I thank you for taking the time to comment.
J-9thxciv [ J 9th 94 ]
Not my style at all and yet... IT TOTALLY TAKES MY BREATH AWAY!!! How can so simple a poem have such profound effect!?!? I am in awe.
That is one of the finest compliments I have ever had, thank you so very much, and I am glad you liked the poem,
A Note
The letter form in prose poetry is wonderful. The succinctness of this one is delightful - Lady A
Thanks
Not sure I understand the first sentence in your comment, but I thank you for taking the time to comment.
J-9thxciv [ J 9th 94 ]
Not my style at all and
Not my style at all and yet... IT TOTALLY TAKES MY BREATH AWAY!!! How can so simple a poem have such profound effect!?!? I am in awe.
thansk for your comment
That is one of the finest compliments I have ever had, thank you so very much, and I am glad you liked the poem,
J-9thxciv [ J 9th 94 ]