Footnote: Muse

Clad in your summer
sun-dress, and dark tights; shoeless,
you walk through the park,
transforming my world, my poems,
liking the way it suits you.

 

 

Kyakuchuu

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A Note

The letter form in prose poetry is wonderful. The succinctness of this one is delightful - Lady A


 

 

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Thanks

Not sure I understand the first sentence in your comment, but I thank you for taking the time to comment.


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Not my style at all and

Not my style at all and yet... IT TOTALLY TAKES MY BREATH AWAY!!! How can so simple a poem have such profound effect!?!? I am in awe.

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thansk for your comment

That is one of the finest compliments I have ever had, thank you so very much, and I am glad you liked the poem,


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