Clad in your summer sun-dress, and dark tights; shoeless, you walk through the park, transforming my world, my poems, liking the way it suits you.
Kyakuchuu
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The letter form in prose poetry is wonderful. The succinctness of this one is delightful - Lady A
Not sure I understand the first sentence in your comment, but I thank you for taking the time to comment.
Seryddwr
Not my style at all and yet... IT TOTALLY TAKES MY BREATH AWAY!!! How can so simple a poem have such profound effect!?!? I am in awe.
That is one of the finest compliments I have ever had, thank you so very much, and I am glad you liked the poem,
A Note
The letter form in prose poetry is wonderful. The succinctness of this one is delightful - Lady A
Thanks
Not sure I understand the first sentence in your comment, but I thank you for taking the time to comment.
Seryddwr
Not my style at all and
Not my style at all and yet... IT TOTALLY TAKES MY BREATH AWAY!!! How can so simple a poem have such profound effect!?!? I am in awe.
thansk for your comment
That is one of the finest compliments I have ever had, thank you so very much, and I am glad you liked the poem,
Seryddwr