Nocturnes: At Silent Valley Asylum

This Alten Kampfer (you know who I mean),
an old man now; veteran---the first World War:
He does believe that someone's time machine
snatched him out of a bunker in Berlin,
and changed the very course of history.
He speaks of it as though a mystery.
No "liberal fool" like I am understands,
he says, the way he purged the Fatherland
of Gypsies, Communists, Poles, Slavs, and Jews.
The time machine has made that "might have been."
For his own actions, he feels no regret;
and says that it could really happen yet,
and make of him a Fuhrer once again.
Profesionally, I am not a lazy
man but, truly, I utterly refuse
to listen to his morbid recitation
of torture, rape, and mass assasination
during what he called, "Night of the Long Knives"
(he even has the numbers; he kept score---
of those whom, he says, had dared to betray
the "Nazi Party," and were proved unfit
to live, or lead, under his full command.
And if that has not quite thoroughly shocked
you, he will gladly speak of "Krystalnacht"---
the night he just snuffed out so many lives.
But when his "Greater Germany" had flung
away chances that led to victory---
generals rejecting his new strategy---
continuation seemed no longer worth
the calling of its glorious destiny.

So he wrote "Project Gotterdamerung,"
the fire that rises from an atom's split,
accomplishing in its conclusive strike,
the full destruction of the corrupt earth.
He understood more then:  that the Third Reich
had been called to a final destiny---
to stand, with flags of swastikas unfurled---
and, with the Fatherland's prestige, preside
over that  last, dramatic detonation
to pulverize---not just conquer---the world.
But he never runs out of words to say,
recycling them in every combination
from his long thought on it.  A bestial pride
informs his swagger and his conversation.
We must find him some sort of occupation,
to free him from his strange imagination:
I think that would be the best therapy---
our motto is, of course, "Arbeit Macht Frei."
The War avenging Archduke Ferdinand's
murder plunged into blood our civilized
culture:  which staggered, nor regained the footing
it once had.  So we should not be surprised
that even some great scholars do not know
humanity convulsed in degradation,
bloodshed in frenzy thirty years ago
and four of those dread years---busily putting
both men and boys through stress that drove them crazy.

 

ENVOI:

 

I tell you this, because we have been friends

a long time.  I heard---Prester John intends

to ask the Mad Laws be reorganized.

And Alten Kampfer might, to, be surprised.

 

Starward

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Some explanatory notes on a controversial subject:
 
Please keep in mind I am not the speaker in the poem; the speaker is a fictional psychiatrist or psychologist in an alternate history in which, apparently, World War Two and the rise of the Third Reich did not happen.
 
Alten Kampfer is a title given to members of the Nazi Party who had joined before Hitler entered the government of the Weimar Republic, and the term means "old struggler."  I hope the identity of this particular Alten Kampfer is made clear in the poem.
 
I have become convinced, by certain historians, that World War I was a far more shocking military experience than its second part (I believe both were part of a single event with a twenty year intermission in between).  Trevanian, in his novel The Summer Of Katya (which I highly, highly recommend, although beware of the double shock of not one but two twist endings), suggests that World War One destroyed four hunder years of civilization that had been in the making since the Reformation began; and that the Second Wolrd War was not as horrifying on the field of battle as its predecessor had been.  The greatest horrors of the Second War followed its end:  the existence of the murder camps, and the Holocaust.
 
The last few lines attempt to show that the collapse of civilization during the First World War (as Trevanian would suggest) made possible the inhuman phenomenon of Adolf Hitler and the National Socialist Workers' Party, and the incredible suffering into which they plunged the world.
 
Both the title and the final line were chosen to honor Manly Wade Wellman's tale, "The Valley Was Still," one of the most chilling examples of Civil War fiction that I have ever read.

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3rd read

I am going to read again in the a.m. hours. Being a bit uneducated in some areas, I am looking up some terms so that I may fully understand this work. Godderdamerung was one of those words. Which if I hadn't looked it up I would keep reading it as "got her, damn a rung." My misplaced sense of humor. Probably used to lighten the weight. 

 

 


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Wow, I like that.  Changing

Wow, I like that.  Changing it slighly, i could be, "Got her a damn rung."  Thre is a poem in there surely.  But I really like that phrase, thank you.  


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