You put your glasses on
Without a makeup on
You looked very pretty
Made my mind filled with sin
When you whined about your crush
Disappearing was my blush
It's like this everyday
Words always replicate
I wanted to love you
But you would never see
I thought you always knew
But all you saw was him
Days passed we never spoke
I told myself you might change
I watched you and him go
You were with him night and day
He told you to go away
You cried to me the next day
You said you'd forget him
But now you came running
Girl, put your glasses though
They're useless anyway
At least they'd hide the pain
Well, everybody knows
umm. B-/C+ good job keep at
umm. B-/C+ good job keep at it
Thank you for the review!This
Thank you for the review!This is the first time I made poems so I'm actually not sure if I'm good at it! Don't worry, I'll try to enhance it more
observation is all well and good
you have to be careful in neighbourhoods
energy flows where attention goes
and yours is yours to waste you know
don't do it so, remain neutral
will minimise any personal hell
even though hell dont exists
you can throw yourself in emotional shit
I've been through very
I've been through very similar situations so it's easy to relate with this (plus I love a girl with glasses). Good stuff, keep writing!
I'm glad to know you like it!
I'm glad to know you like it! Thank you for reading!
I'm sorry to hear what
I'm sorry to hear what happened between you and the "girl with glasses." I used to feel the same towards this one guy whom I used to fall in love with a couple years back (weird thing was he wore glasses too) and he never noticed my feelings towards him and pretty much ignored me after he went out with this one girl. This poem is really good and emotional about unrequited love :/
Thank you for reading it!
Thank you for reading it! This girl became bitter though when I confessed to her. Until now, we didn't talk to each other again
I'm very sorry to hear that
I'm very sorry to hear that :/ I really hate it when girls are like that. I hope things will go better for you in the future when you meet different people. And you're welcome for reading it! ^.^