Beautiful as ever then before
I have laid my eyes onto
One of the most amazing people ever
Eyes as beautiful as the ocean
But behind those eyes hides toment and pain
A angel sent from god under so much pressure
A sweetheart, I want her happy
A friend she truly is
A angel, a friend, a goddess
well i decided to check out your Dana poems cuz, well... that's my name too heh. i liked this one the most out of the three of them. its really sweet. anyways, nice job!
~*Dana*~
Hey matt.....This is beautiful and it's about me!!! yay But great poems..well thats it for my critique. Buh bye