The Feel of You

I feel you warm as you took my hand

and held me close, and closer

Undressing, and softly caressing,

Like the petals of a delicate rose.

I feel you warm as you kissed me deep

As you kissed me with desire

Your breath feels hot upon my neck,

I close my eyes, and I tremble.

I feel you warm as you touch my skin,

Memorizing with your fingers.

I moan and sigh against your ear

You whisper back, and I shiver.

I feel you warm as you lay me down

And possess me now completely,

I feel your heat, I feel your heart,

Like mine, its beating wildly,

I feel you as you push me slow,

Against sheets, towards this something

I feel you as you move in me

In your rhythms, hard and needy,

I feel you and I feel you

As you drown inside my being,

I feel you warm and liquid,

And I yearn to feel you again.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

All my senses are messed up. ^___^

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Afzal Shauq's picture

a good poem with meangiful theme and really like it and love your words which omit the reality... its your identity telling the truth...welcome for comments and hope you never stop commenting my best friend... here is my famosu say to remeber and pass on to your fans and friends ... ((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with... afzal shauq )))mean I am peace wisher and ish the world in peace on the path of love and humantarian ground