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I ran away into the sky

And found a lake on the moon

And sat beside the silver shine 

And the sun was there, and you, too

 

The reeds were silver and grey like dust 

And ashen willows swayed in cosmic winds

I ran away into the sky

And I never came back home again

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    a scene created faster

 

 

a scene created faster than any oil painting artist

 

On the one hand, freedom

On the other, the place seems somewhat sad

 

 



 

 

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Wow!  The imagery of this

Wow!  The imagery of this poem conveys an emotional profundity far greater than the small space occupied by these few lines---always a sign of classic talent.


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