A Magic Spell

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Till my heart doth stop

Till the sky doth drop

Till all matter grows cold

And creation's dying cough

Expels all trace of the race of men

So long shall I love you

From this time

To the End

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Beatnik1979's picture

Yes

im picking up on this.

an incantation...a spell..

how electrifying......

I havent seen may on here, 

probably because of the archaic nature of it....

but that’s what i dig about it....

it shrouds itself in the mystery of beauty and lore.

 

Bravo.

Naboostarfighter7's picture

Romantic

It's a nice poem an it's qute romantic, You might find a woman with poetry skills such as those.


Honestly

J. Rodriguez

rachel's picture

Thank you! It was actually

Thank you! It was actually written to an old boyfriend.  He was not a poet, unfortunately.