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@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Cinnamon, Sandalwood, And Naked Pleasure [ /;\ ]
Scents of cinnamon
and sandalwood; out of the
boyfriends' deeply brown,
full nakedness, fragrant strings
of sweetstuff achieve splashdown.
Kyakuchuu
Scents of cinnamon
and sandalwood; out of the
boyfriends' deeply brown,
full nakedness, fragrant strings
of sweetstuff achieve splashdown.
Kyakuchuu
Sly move, evoking the scents
Sly move, evoking the scents of sandalwood and cinnamon which have fiery, often nostalgic, associations for many people. Tied in with the visuals, the effect is powerful. Nice one.
Thanks for understanding my
Thanks for understanding my strategy for the poem, and explicating it well!
Starwardist