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Afterglow; flaccid
refraction; boyfriends with
just socks on; sheer, dark
blue socks like nights' skies,
wet with streaks like comet's tails.
Kyakuchuu
Afterglow; flaccid
refraction; boyfriends with
just socks on; sheer, dark
blue socks like nights' skies,
wet with streaks like comet's tails.
Kyakuchuu
You are certainly rocking
You are certainly rocking this form! I love the celestial enchantment you brewed with metaphors here. The skillful wordcrafting also casts a warm glow over the scene, for instance: "just socks on" is poetry while "naked except for socks" would have been prosaic.
And those "comet's tails". Now that's fresh and vibrant imagery!
Enjoying these bite-sized flashes of beauty that merge Heaven and Earth, the flesh and the spirit, the small and the vast, the everyday and the astronomical. Keep penning vital brilliance!
Thank you very much. I am so
Thank you very much. I am so grateful for your comments,
J-Called