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Be My Love
Come closer, closer and closer
To wear me like your garments
Spray your body with my love
To shower perfumes and scents
You will be prettier and prettier
Put on me as your lipstick
I’ll be your handcream, hairbrush
Touch or kiss me, I shall click
Dip deeper, deeper and deeper
Into my soul your passion
Sip me, my sea, sip drop by drop
Like lemonade in your fashion
Curl up in my enfolding arms
For they work like a charm
And kisses of mine like vitamin pills
Will keep you secure and warm
I am to soothe away that aches you
You would need no more balms
Give you a massage I will daily
With my fingers and palms
Come and see finer and finer
Your painting on my canvas
The only canvas is my heart
With all hues of tenderness
Come live with me and be my love
We may get Manna and Dew
We would enter the Milky Way
Begin our lives anew
Beautiful love poem.
Your quite a lover,
and a writer. Enjoyed
the read. Thanks for
sharing your talent.
The endless joys of love are always the favorite subject of poets & kings.
It is a multi faceted emotion. There is no other subject that can be written with such eloquence & diversity.
"I'll be your handcream, your hairbrush..." a sensual choice of words to describe the intimacy of such simple actions.
Well said. Well done.
Amy
Gentle is the night♥
Gorgeous writing! I especially like the second last stanza.Really beautiful. thanks for posting.Im goning to go read more of urs I enjoy them.:)
Quite well said.
This is a wonderful romantic piece... and evidently the inspiration for Valerie's latest poetry...which I am posting below... I think she had a wonderful response. Thank you for sharing this one Iqbal...it is written in a wonderful style...one that I enjoy using as well. My newest one is called... "I Feel You" which I believe is similar in nature. A LOVE SONG Hold me tighter and tighter And dress me in your arms Leaving your scent upon me Enjoy my feminine charms I will feel lovelier than lovely When my lips impart to yours Moist, soft as satin roses Long kisses to endure Move into my anatomy Imprint into my soul Drink from me O my darling My nectar as it pours Hold me in your arms tonight Make my spirit soar Let me know with you I'm safe In your arms I feel your warmth Let my eyes behold the portrait Which shines in your brown eyes Of two lovers walking arm in arm Beneath the rainbow of paradise In your arms the pains of life do cease Your kisses medicative With body eased and manipulated Our loved is consecrated Take me in your arms tonight Make your heart my home Dance with me among the stars Hereafter and evermore -- by: Valerie Jochum
Iqbal, as I read this tender piece, I could simply close my eyes and let you ravish me!! ;-) What a courting poem you have written! Certainly makes this woman "wonder" whether there is truly a man who could bestow such spoilings upon a woman, or if reading your poem is merely to be used as a spendid fantasy. ~sigh~ BE MY LOVE is definitely a keeper in my book! Thank you for brining such beauty into my life this morning...