standing on the batlements
high atop this wall
I see an army marching forth
that I assume will fall
at my camand
my archers let arrows fly
and I grin as my warning
arches through the sky
not far from them
shafts fall in the feild
and without a care
every man raises his sheild
and through the arrows they march
I call for another volly
and smile as I watch this war start
most arrows are blocked
and very few fall
the rest break form
and dash for the wall
some fire arrows but
most hide behind sheilds
and I watch as about a dozen ladders
are draged through the feilds
the ladders reach the wall
sooner than I expected
and as I order my archers fire
the enamy climbs the other walls undetected
as the arrows fly downward
I smile as screaming is heard
but I realize the screaming
is coming from my own men
and I look around to see
the soldiers closing in
my men break ranks
while I yell for them to defend
we are out numberd
at least five to one
I draw my axe as I realize
my end has begun
they caught me off guard
and for that I shall pay
but just for fun
lets see how many I can slay
love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poet and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq