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Unlit sky
My world revolved like a pen
scrolling words of love around you
But these were unedified scrambles of hoping
and you were further than the sun.
Now the ink has run dry
and the timeless words faded
what is there left,
but this impending fade to black.
yours reticently,
Inkstain.
What you really need is one
What you really need is one of these. At 100 bucks a pop, they are well worth every penny...
Seriously, tough---
Love this poem and the 'dry' humour too.
http://www.amazon.com/Logitech-io-Personal-Digital-Pen/dp/B00006JP23
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
;-)
May we have more, please!!!
!!!?!!! -?...? ! :p
!!!?!!! -?...? ! :p
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Touche! butis mine a
Touche! butis mine a complement as was yours?
Smooth One
I am ROTFLMAO at your comment. - Stain's writing is stellar, neh? ~~A~~
Yes indeed Lady A, a stellar
Yes indeed Lady A, a stellar approach is needed, thus I took one in my latest piece.
OH MAN! I adore those first
OH MAN! I adore those first two lines!
I am excited to see more from you :)
Much Love
Ashley
I am finding myself adoring
I am finding myself adoring your writings...
:) I am blushing
:) I am blushing
Much Love
Ashley
I'm complicated.
If you add a little moisture to your dried up ink the emotions would flow better.
Sometimes we find ourselves at a standstill upon the paper when we are trying to breathe life back into the words that have already began to fade,
because we tend to repeat what we say when the reader wasn't listening to begin with. So we try to find ways to say it differently. Something to attract the attention again...like instead of black a neon green, or puke yellow. Xp
I hope you can read between my lines. T.T
"My world revolved like a pen
scrolling words of love around you."
Love this. ^.^
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
I have found much envy in
I have found much envy in your works Ms twisted of ashes. Thankyou for your gifts and how well you summated my scrawls in those two incredulous lines.
<3
Scroll those words of love around
I live to hear a loving sound...
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