Bobbing aimlessly,
righteous on the water
A clumsy paper boat
Sun-bleached mad love notes
made of imperfect folds
Sublime at wasting time
No barred holds
Lazy paper sails effortlessly
while intricate origami
wrestles waves to stay afloat
What mystery,
submarined by your very own complexity
Enjoyed This Write
Nice image unity and clear message - I vote yes for this verse. :D
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