Paper Submarine

Bobbing aimlessly,

righteous on the water 

A clumsy paper boat

Sun-bleached mad love notes 

made of imperfect folds

Sublime at wasting time

No barred holds

Lazy paper sails effortlessly 

while intricate origami 

wrestles waves to stay afloat

What mystery,

submarined by your very own complexity 

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allets's picture

Enjoyed This Write

Nice image unity and clear message - I vote yes for this verse. :D 

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~S~



Onyamaichi

 

Stephen's picture

Ah, she returns to us as sublime as ever.

Great write.