Mourning blessings
Night terrors
I grope blindly
Caress your bent pages
You lay open for me willfully
as you had a hundred times before
I hold you like I'd have held my son
Now I hold my empty womb
I stopped asking why
I don't feign to understand the cosmos
Though I have grieved enough for every dying star
Enjoyed, good mix of vivid
Enjoyed, good mix of vivid imagery and clean expression.
My Secret River
Beautiful write. xP
Beautiful write. xP
appreciate it !!
appreciate it !!
Let your teeth show
Wow. Those last two lines
Wow. Those last two lines are among the most powerful I have ever read, in forty-five years of reading poetry.
Starward
wow thanks so much
wow thanks so much
Let your teeth show
scin·til·la
Love "scintillae" the plural noun form. The synonymic connotations are incredible! The mininscule - a small reflection. Neato and heart felt write - longingly sent and artfully received. ~allets~
I admire your love of words,
I admire your love of words, and knew if anyone would receive this gift of a word, it'd be you. I meant this word as in speck or atom. Something that may seem miniscule. The plural is even prettier! Have a good night!
Let your teeth show
this is lust
this is lust
i feel the book is a methapor
i feel the book is a methapor for him
enjoed the read
ron parrish