I found eternity in your soul
You were novel and newfangled, easy to bite into
You had a rich patina marred by perpetuity
We kissed with blistering lips
Whispering sticky words like honeycomb
Coating my tongue
I begged you to be mean, Saccharine
Instead you left me dumb and blind
You have a very adept command
You have a very adept command of images, and I really admire how you deploy them.
Starward
Wear Marks
That's the description I have sought for in literature for decades: a perpetuity marred patina. Wondrous portrait. I am mesmerized by this 3-D personae. ~A~
Your words mean everything to
Your words mean everything to me, Lady A! Patina and aura poetry are favorites of mine!
Let your teeth show