Concept

Plucking wildflowers on a dusty road, barefoot

The sun would peek through lissome clouds 

I'd inhale the perfume of moist earth and pretty weeds

I wouldn't have a care in the world besides

 flower crowns, time, and sunshine

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Seryddwr's picture

This is my most favorite poem

This is my most favorite poem of yours, and I cannot find sufficient words to describe it.


Seryddwr

tallsquirrelgirl's picture

"Flower crowns, time, and

"Flower crowns, time, and sunshine"...this was such a gorgeous image! Loved it!


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

bishu's picture

This was very very nice

Please write another few more lines. Best wishes


©bishu 

 

Finsmojo's picture

I like this, it's peaceful..

I like this, it's peaceful.. Great job!:)

allets's picture

Great Place To Be

Thank you for taking me there - enjoyed and felt the calm.

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16 weeks since your last post. Hope all is well. 05-17-16 slc 

 

 

 


 

 

Incompl's picture

Thank you!

Just no time to write, unfortunately. I drop by to read some great poetry every once and a while but I don't see getting any more time in the near future... Keep up the amazing work, I love reading it dearly!


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allets's picture

Too Late

You will always be a poet. When life is busiest, the view may turn poetuc, and the words will come and demand to be written down. It is the curse of those who write as well as you, Incompli.  U r a work in progress! Never to be completed. Best wishes to you and all those you love. - Stella -