Night Thoughts

The very picture of fashionable melancholy

Hands tangled in long dark hair

A face twisted into mock horror

Lips like blood on pale snow

O! Cynthia!

Nine nights

Nine different beds

He payed extra to hear her last ragged breath

 
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Other than the nine nights,

Other than the nine nights, and the name of Cynthia, this poem reminds me very much of Jack the Ripper, or someone like Jack the Ripper.  Is that close?

 


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Powerful Write

9 beds? last breath? Enormous emotions at hard work here - Whew! incredible telling. - allets