Thunderbolt

On the thunderbolt I rode

down to hell, banished from paradise,

denied her love,

now I sit in the squaller of dispair,

trying to figure out what to do next,

Author's Notes/Comments: 

you can catch the paradise lost allusions.

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allets's picture

Never Read Paradise Lost

Too gloomy, same with Dante's Inferno - I tried and after a few minutes of reading - put on music to restore my good and happy outlook. Fine poem though. I liked the last line best ~Lady A~

 


 

 

EventHorizon's picture

Milton and Dante were big

Milton and Dante were big influences on me. I like the morbid epic style of writing.