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A Bitter Boy Whines
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Stuff that could be worse. I am hurt and confused
And who made you the fairer sex?
There's nothing fair about your ways
I bite my nails and they hurt too
Nerves bear your heel's fine point
Where is the justice in saving yourself?
You hurt me and I laugh, and you laugh
Did you ever know I was hurt?
I laugh because I have to.
Is my expense where it's at?
Is that how you can go on spiting?
It's just Jared, he's always OK.
And I always will be OK
No thanks to you.
And no thanks to your sense of fairness.
Sadly...I don't believe you are generalizing.
Hi, Jared!
Yes, love is tough and is always abstract! Your emotion really pulls through this poem. As for your generalization on girls, not all girls want a romantic guy. Don't forget that. Also, I like the wording of the title. It really strikes interest in a reader like me. Keep up the great work!
~Kathy
i really like this poem because you tell how u feel.. i respect you for that if u want you can read some of mine and tell me what you think ;)
-Claire Glover
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