Verse 1 (mood 1)
A million ways to die
You picked the one that hurts the most
The one that kills you on the inside
Destroys the spirit not the host
An empty body reeks of discontent
Damaged mind with room for rent
This poor soul must be content
To finish its days with strangers
Pre-Chorus (mood 1)
Through it all I can almost comprehend
Why you would do this to yourself
Chorus
Shifty and rose-rimmed content, deliberately dismayed, disarrayed
(Eyes that smile while gleaming like glass)
Shifty (eyes) and (that) rose-rimmed (smile), content (while) deliberately (gleaming), dismayed (like) disarrayed (glass)
But can't her hurtful nature acquiesce
(I understand selfish intentions, just acquiesce)
But (I) can't (understand) her (selfish) hurtful (intentions), nature (just) [acquiesce]
Verse 2 (mood 1)
I watched you two walk on the fake marble floor
Light pouring through the numerous windows
You were sucked in, didn't get your bearings before
The light dried up, she pulled the shutters down
You were warned with plain dissent
Until my patience was spent
Now your soul must be content
To finish its days with strangers
Pre-Chorus (mood 1)
Through it all I can almost comprehend
Why you would do this to yourself
Chorus
Shifty and rose-rimmed content, deliberately dismayed, disarrayed
(Eyes that smile while gleaming like glass)
Shifty (eyes) and (that) rose-rimmed (smile), content (while) deliberately (gleaming), dismayed (like) disarrayed (glass)
But can't her hurtful nature acquiesce
(I understand selfish intentions, just acquiesce)
But (I) can't (understand) her (selfish) hurtful (intentions), nature (just) [acquiesce]
Verse 3 (mood 1)
You looked so happy playing in her sunlight
Now you search blindly for a cut off cord
You don't like thrashing in the dark, right?
You could change things and you know it but you don’t
Bridge
And you don’t even try to change things
You just justify what you think is good enough
Just what will suffice, but why settle for less?
Why settle for nothing?
Verse 1 (mood 2)
A jagged smile painted on an angel's servant's face
Previously privileged now no more than commonplace
Coming down to earth was not so hard now after all
Was it?
Pre-Chorus (mood 2)
Don't you know what you've done?
Don’t you know, don’t you know
When you reach a certain point
Things you do, things you say
Effect how other people feel
Understand, understand
Chorus
Shifty and rose-rimmed content, deliberately dismayed, disarrayed
(Eyes that smile while gleaming like glass)
Shifty (eyes) and (that) rose-rimmed (smile), content (while) deliberately (gleaming), dismayed (like) disarrayed (glass)
But can't her hurtful nature acquiesce
(I understand selfish intentions, just acquiesce)
But (I) can't (understand) her (selfish) hurtful (intentions), nature (just) [acquiesce]
Verse 2 (mood 2)
The curl of your lip sends shivers through the adamantine
Break them down like you do the likes of which we've all seen
Coming down to earth is harder the higher up you get
Isn't it?
Pre-Chorus (mood 2)
Don't you know what you do?
Don’t you know, don’t you know
When you reach a certain point
Things you do, things you say
Effect how other people feel
Understand, understand
Chorus
Shifty and rose-rimmed content, deliberately dismayed, disarrayed
(Eyes that smile while gleaming like glass)
Shifty (eyes) and (that) rose-rimmed (smile), content (while) deliberately (gleaming), dismayed (like) disarrayed (glass)
But can't her hurtful nature acquiesce
(I understand selfish intentions, just acquiesce)
But (I) can't (understand) her (selfish) hurtful (intentions), nature (just) [acquiesce]
Resolution
It would take a miracle
For you to take responsiblity
Take these words with all of my love
You've knocked me out with unjust capers
For all the pillars you fall from now on
Remember to think about things first
And before you try and fall in love again
Grow up
That is REALLY well-written. I like this part the best:
A million ways to die
You picked the one that hurts the most
The one that kills you on the inside
Destroys the spirit not the host
An empty body reeks of discontent
Damaged mind with room for rent
Great job! Adieu~ Melissa
In reguards to that Johnny boy up there ^
Please do not listen to him (although I have a feeling you won't, anyway).
People like that are such idiots, don't they realize that you write these things for YOURSELF?
And not to get attention from the INTERNET folks.
But anyway,
I liked this one a lot, especially the "verse 1 (mood 1)".
<3 Hillary
to dreary. stop writing stupid sad songs. theyre the worst. write something that will make people think, not stupid shit that that you hope will make people feel sorry for you.
you said it wasnt entirely successfull . . . . but you got your point across. so . .. well done. This was quite different and I liked it.
jen