If it makes sense to me
maybe someone else
can try to understand
But it doesn't matter if
they can't ,all that
does is that i can
so keep on riding
keep on running
whatever jes dont
break stride
one day it gets easier
simpler to move
no effort you
will jes glide
man...this is another exelent poem...i think i like the first one better though...this one waz real good too...thanx for the pro writeing...i enjoy to read what others think about my poetry...thanx alot, lata
i like this one.... good job hun