Untitled -- 3.2.2004

If it makes sense to me

maybe someone else

can try to understand



But it doesn't matter if

they can't ,all that

does is that i can



so keep on riding

keep on running

whatever jes dont

break stride



one day it gets easier

simpler to move

no effort you

will jes glide

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i dont like this one that much but hey someone might

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Alexis Hunter's picture

man...this is another exelent poem...i think i like the first one better though...this one waz real good too...thanx for the pro writeing...i enjoy to read what others think about my poetry...thanx alot, lata

Liberty Bell's picture

i like this one.... good job hun