All around me
tension mounds
On top of tension
as they fall
And all plans fail
But I will be fine.
I know all I see
piles heavy like pounds
Although I never mention
Inside I recall
And all heads to hell
But Dammit I'ma be Alright.
They tell it should bother
like it bothers them
but I learn from theirs
as though they were Mine
I could listen to my mother
or my father, even him
and let myself be killed by cares
as if it weren't enough to kill me in time.
So I trust my heart
and my soul
I won't fall apart
and let go.
I can really relate to this poem probably more than any of your others. You have a unique style of writing, keep it up.
PE@CE and God Bless!
Hey...Thanks for your comment :-) I really enjoy your poems as well. Some are harder to understand than others, but thats what I love about them. It causes me to remember those the best. I love your style of writing. I chose to comment on this one cuz I can really relate it to right now. My life's been throwing some pretty big rocks at me lately, but I know in the end I'll be okay. The sun is coming and the rain will stop :-) Never stop writing...you have an amazing talent...
~Always
Nikki