Souless Nights

I am spacious within

You have what I need

There's nothing to begin

Even if I were to plead



I'm crying out

But really within

To find what you can rate



I grab your soul

And wrap it around

The bitter, calous hate

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poetvg's picture

lovely piece

Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

Okay the end is the best part for me so good and I think I have never seen you write a happy poem Granola doesn't count

Don't start though, i like your work the way it is
nikki


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running_with_rabbits's picture

like I said before
I like it but the last three lines are the very best

ash


Much Love

Ashley