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Closed eyes,

Slow sighs -

Sunrise.. a dream away;

 

Destiny had rung,

But hopes still sung,

And the night refused to decay -

 

Time, the cure,

To a past, impure;

Pain - the only price..

 

Fate's hug,

Faith's tug -

And midnight's twelve cries..

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last updated 12 April 2013 - 5:35pm
©10 April 2013 - 9:44pm — i.r3peNt
11 April 2013 - 1:43am — SSmoothie
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This was great I really like

This was great I really like the distilled form and the ideas it conjured. Well done love the titile too! 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

11 April 2013 - 6:14pm — i.r3peNt
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Thank you so much :)

Thank you so much :)

11 April 2013 - 11:55pm — allets
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Purely Surreal Title

Loved this one...wished the punctuation was gone and the capital letters - to open the reader up to the internal metamorphosis and dream qualities floating throughout ~~A~~

 

 

12 April 2013 - 5:36pm — i.r3peNt
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I gave the punctuations for

I had reasons for the punctuations though.. :)