I heard a knock at the door today
But I didn't open up.
I just laid on the floor
And counted the tiles on the ceiling.
now this is gold.
Short, simple, but leaves the reader wondering:
"Was she hurt?"
"Is she depressed?"
"Was she slowly succumbing to her death?"
"Simply bored, and too lazy to move?"
Ugh!
Love. <3
^-^
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Why thank you, I think it's my favorite that I've written so far. I'm starting to change my style.
Oh,
now this is gold.
Short, simple, but leaves the reader wondering:
"Was she hurt?"
"Is she depressed?"
"Was she slowly succumbing to her death?"
"Simply bored, and too lazy to move?"
Ugh!
Love. <3
^-^
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Why thank you, I think it's
Why thank you, I think it's my favorite that I've written so far. I'm starting to change my style.