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The Cyclicality of an Unoriginal Life
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The Wanderer Scars marked with indelible pain
Tend to last and never wane
Even when you seem to heal
You fall again and start to kneel
In hopes to be saved from the valley of loss
But there are demons you can't easily toss
So you relive every nightmare in your mind
Because maybe there’s a solution you can find
But searching for solace in the past
Is something you know will never last
Secretly you know the irrationality of it all
But sometimes it is simpler to surrender to your fall
The emotion in this poem is
The emotion in this poem is very heavy and, for a lesser poet, would be unbearable. But you manage it with a very deft use of a ballad form for it.
J-9thxciv (J 9th 94)
praying for a better
praying for a better past.
dwelling. stagnance. good poem. can relate. heartbreak sucks. but it's necessary for growth.
yerp... pain is the manuer in
yerp... pain is the manuer in which a flower can bloom xP.... thank you for commenting :)!
Ah, yes, 'searching for
Ah, yes, 'searching for solace in the past.' I'm very sentimental and nostalgic for 'good gone days.' I get it. :)
I actually wrote this due to
I actually wrote this due to the inspiration of someone I know who constantly finds themselves in these patterns in life.... they constantly trap themselves by being consumed by the past
Correction: second
Correction: second "paragraph", first line.... Did you mean hopes? Or hope without the (s)? Loved the poem. :) I just hate looking back at my works later only to find typos... O.o so I thought I might save the trouble unless of course it was written that way on purpose. Great job on this wonderful little piece. :D and I like the new profile pic a lot.
oh ya... it's hopes.... thank
oh ya... it's hopes.... thank you ^_^ haha... god.. I hate typos... but I'm incapable of NOT making them x).... I'm glad you liked it... and thank you :P
Wow
Your a really amazing writer, I might be 14 but I know this fact. I love to write poetry. Nice meeting you:3
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! You've made my week :)
Like It A Lot
"Scars marked with indelible pain..." That is one bravo line! ~Star~
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Just Reread
"...solace in the past...." does last - by virtue of visitation rights anytime. The past makes you who you are - but not to get lost in it is a rule otherwise you do not move forward and make plans - a sign of depression. Good write -A-
Thank you, Lady A! :)
Thank you, Lady A! :)