Water
I can see threw it
Like a crystal ball
So clean like rain
Such purity and innocence
I stand in the rain for hours
Washing away my sins, my fears, my troubles
Now I am pure
As clean as the rain
And you can see threw me
You can see my heart, my body, my soul
I am as pure as a goddess
And then I drink the water
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i love this poem. it was written well. not many people can pull off a short poem and have it read well. great job. i love the rain and everything about it...keep up the good work.