One of my songs called "Look around"

I can't explain what I'm seeing,
 I close my eyes,
and I don't know what I'm seeing,
is there a reason,
for this,
I wish.

 

Destruction,
endless abduction.
what has gone wrong,
the innocent follow along,

 

the world must pay,
we live in hell everyday,
pay attention and look around,
you'd be astound,

 

Destruction,
endless abduction.
what has gone wrong,
the innocent follow along,

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heatherburns35's picture

a song

 Nice writing. I have tried to write a song but just can't get the hang of it. 

Leo87's picture

very nice.. keep it up

very nice.. keep it up

Shawnisbeast1's picture

Thank you! I appreciate it.

Thank you! I appreciate it.