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Sean Asks Vance for Advice

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Sean and Seina Meet Saga

Vance, my friend,

I think I have met the girl I want to marry.

She will bring my single life to an end.

Should I ask her? Should I tarry?



Would it be too soon to ask?

Do you think it would scare her away?

This is a daunting task,

My heart wants to ask her today.



What to do? What to do?

Would you ask her if it were you?



When I am near her, it seems,

I am in a room full of steam.

I stumble over my tongue,

I can’t get air into my lungs.



Since I met her I can’t eat, I can’t sleep,

Okay, I can’t sleep, all I do is think of Seina,

I want her forever and for keeps,

I need my Seina.

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Carrying on the saga until Judy is back with us. Xrifles (Vance) you are up at bat. For those that would like to follow along http://home.cfl.rr.com/hucksoap/theymeet.htm will list the poems in order. Poets that are contributors please don't forget to add the hucksoap link at the end of your poems so new folks can go back to the beginning.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 6:07pm
©18 April 2008 - 5:15pm — hhickson
18 April 2008 - 10:20pm — jgupta
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"When I am near her, it seems,
I am in a room full of steam.
I stumble over my tongue,
I can’t get air into my lungs."

It is really tough for Sean indeed! You have described your imagination with real flair...