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My Mind's Eye
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Love of my Life In my mind's eye I see
A vision of you and me
Lying on secluded beach
Lost in each other's arms for weeks.
Drinking the nectar of our souls
In numbers of kisses untold
Nothing covering us but blue sky
This I see in my mind's eye.
Our love consumes us there on the sand
As you respond to the touch of my hand
It explores every facet of your body
As my lips search and follow.
They find the fullness of your breast
With a motion of kissing and flicking you love best.
Then ever downward to that honey pie
This I see in my mind's eye.
Your moan in ecstacy for only the gulls to hear
As I rise and kiss away your fear
For tomorrow once again we must fly,
But this moment remains, forever, in my mind's eye.
Passionate, sweet, romantic, heart warming, tender, loving. I loved it and was swept away. Thanks for sharing this with me. :o)
Huck,
That was sensual and romantic... I really enjoyed that one...
I think you could do erotic poems with no problems.... very good write... Why not give it a try, you might surprise yourself....
Thanks for sharing this with me...
Peace and Love..
Judy
Very good...I like this...thought you said you couldn't write the sexy stuff???? *G*
Quite invigorating, even for this "retired, old man"!! I'll try to match you, and plan to use a word from each line (remember "Gimmee-5, -10, etc.from the good-old-days?!)
BOY!! That beach scene has a LOT of memories for me!!
Looks as tho' I'll hafta do a double Sonnet, since I'll need a like line-count as yours, and I really do prefer working within a form; blank verse leaves me....well...sorta BLANK!!
Do we have a challenge here, for you, Mr H???
"Poe" I'm not, nor "Rich" am I,
but I'll be famous, b'ye and b'ye !
I think you should consider a career as a romance writer...not bad for a guy! (just kidding). Do you currently read romance novels? I think you could really do some good historical romances. There aren't too many male authors - they would probably really sell. Women are always curious to read romance novles that are written by men. Most women don't think men can do it as well as women. I think they're wrong. Of course, you have a great muse!
Alyssa
Great sensual experience for our readers' minds too.
Smilesz.
THanxs for this treat - very vividly portrayed.