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Unburried roots Crumbled in my waiting
for this flowing river
to pour itself into the ocean
As she cuts
new uncharted pathways
through the sands
Time waits for no one
it just passes by
and we age in the meantime
growing always closer
to death's doors
Then the transition
when our spirits rise
out of the confines
of bodily life
I think it is excellent! if
I think it is excellent! if it isnt finished the mind only wonders where on earth she will take it from here! :) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
this is coming along
this is coming along beautifully. I believe it isnt finished yet i think one more verse with the quintessential essence is missing between verse 1 and 2 make 2 verse 3 and you will have another jewel in your gorgeous crown~ hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Yeah, I agree. I had two
Yeah, I agree. I had two other lines but decided they sounded trite so left it unfinished. Maybe tonight, after I reread I'll feel it. Thanks Ssmoothie!!! Mucho appreciated critique. :) Hugs
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