She did the mummer's dance
while the music played she
twirled, swayed did a sexy prance.
She did this for marco polo
she did not know who he was
but oh my she put on a show.
She was the love of the highway man
the daughter of a peasant farmer
they were of a family clan.
She was the most beautiful child
her love was so intense
but she had a heart that was wild.
It was only the idea of love
that kept her feet on the ground
and her eyes on heavens above.
She grew into a woman old
had lived a life full
her heart tamed but never cold.
Absolutely stunning writing. This was a pleasure to read.
Great poem I come away from this verse shaking my head and saying; 'How true, How true; love can keep us young forever' Here is an inference in your poem that is never mention and yet it can be clearly seen - HER SMILE! I swear I can see her smile. Great poem.
What an original idea. I like the concept, and I like where you went with it. "Her heart tamed but never cold."
Hi Renee You are such a talent girl!!!!!!!! You never cease to amaze this envious person here. Great poem, enjoyed immensely....Keep up the good work. Have a good one :) Roz
LOVELY,MAYBE I'LL CHECK OUT THIS CD
???? My sister, you never cease to amaze me. Sometimes, I wish that I could walk around in your head for even 5 minutes. It must be a wonderful place. Again, a tribute to Loreena MacKinnit is an honour to her. If only she knew how much we admire her talent, eh? Beautiful & haunting. Amy
Gentle is the night♥
This is really nice Ren! I think you should try to submist this for publishing! Good work!
Unique idea! It turned out very well, I like it!