MAN OF MY DREAMS

I use to think I'd never find

a truly loving man nor one so kind.

The Great Spirit dropped you in my lap it seems

and I've found the man, the man of my dreams.



We met, talked hit off from the start...

To you my loving man I pledge my heart.

I love that we have such an easy way.

I love coming home to you at the end of the day.



We love to laugh, talk, play and tease.

You are the only one I care to please.

You give such great huggies so I can sleep.

You are there to hold me when fear makes me weep.



Being apart from you is the thing I hate most.

The way you love me is something about which I boast.

I've suffered through bad relationships not knowing why.

I understand now it was so I would except this loving guy.



So thank you dear for the man you are.

Know in my heart you are my only star.

Every moment you show me nothing but love.

I know now you are a gift from above.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is for the most wonderful man in the world...... I LOVE YOU HONEY......

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Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee Being the big sook I am.. that one bought a tear to my eye. It was so well written... I just loved everything about it.. and I am sure your man did too. Great read Roz :)

Robert  LaFountain's picture

I have a feeling deep down inside that tells me that you can rest assured that this loving man you wirte about loves you with all his heart and soul.

Edwin Robinette's picture

You can tell that this poem was written in the spirit of love. Beautifully done too!

Rhonda M's picture

Another beautiful poem Renee. You are truly lucky to find a love like this.

Deborah  Russell's picture

You are a romantic Renee'!!! this is sooo beautiful, and it is nice to know, in this day and age, there are still "lovers in love"...especially married ones...(smile) I loved this one...guess im a bit of a romantic too?

tanya's picture

err ummm typo there ralte= relate sorry about that tanya

tanya's picture

this one must be a new one Renee...i am so glad i saw it...i love it, and i can truly ralte to this :o) tanya

Tim Marshall's picture

IS THIS NEW,I'V MUST HAVE MISSED IT IT A+ I LOVE IT

J M's picture

I really appreciated the term "The Great Spirit".....gave it a nice touch!

Michelle Noel's picture

Renee, well you know how I feel about this poem. simply beautiful....I love it. And arent you the lucky one to have found this love... I'll bet you are the Queen of his heart as well as the Queen of PostPoems!!!! Michelle