A little lady bug landed on my finger
it made me wonder what to do.
Seeing as how she was so tiny
and fragile to it's true.
I took her in my small hand
and walked with her right outside.
Let her climb upon a little leaf
but a spider got her and she died.
So the next time that a lady bug
should come and land on my fingers.
I think I'll choose to let her stay
and see just how long she lingers.
I hear that it brings good luck
to the one that the lady bug should choose.
Now I feel so horrible at this death
I just have the lady bug blues.
A cute poem indeed! First time I ever had thoughts about a ladybug, after reading this! Nice work!
ahhhhhhhh....poor Renee' i bet most of us have had similar experiences...this was really nice.
Now, that's cute.
sMILESZ..wat more can i say?~?~... its all spoken of and mentioned in such sincere truth by those pple above mine....hehehe/... Another great work by u... Innocent , indeed.. Take care , always...
Hiya Renee This one was very sweet! Your imagination and talent never ceases to amaze me. Keep up the good work! You are an inspiration to all of us wanna be poets. :) Cya and have a great day Roz :)
I know this poem has a sad ending, but, this is the cutest one you have ever written. it is innocent & full of life. i will never put a lady bug outside ever again, i promise. LOL Your friend, amy
Gentle is the night♥
this was so sad renee...makes me think of the people i have lost in my lifetime..thankyou for reminding me of that tanya
Renee' THis is soo sweet..I mean not that the ladybug died..but that ya wrote a poem about it! It is really good too!!! Keep em coming..I love to read them!
AWESOME!!!!!! Isn't that how everyone feels about life, and what usually happens when you let things go...... something seems to die from it is what I am saying....once again, AWESOME!!!! Keep up the writing, you are really gifted at this!!!!
Another great poem Renee!!! Who would have thought you could get me interested in reading about Ladybugs :)) "and she just how long she lingers" did you mean see instead of the first she in that line? Anyway...as always....you hit the mark oh Queen of Postpoems!!!
That's very cute, renee.