The Lust Of Drugs

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Your momma says your stupid

'an everythings falling down



you only do it

to be "in" with the crowd



You think it'll get you some respect

But its killin you inside



you cant go on like this

Theres no place to hide...



Got to get out

before its too late



no one will help you

ain't got no mate



Where have allthe people gone

The ones you thoght were friends



What the fuck is wrong with this

is this the end of me?



I cant see a thing...its so dark

Where has every one gone?



COME BACK! Please help me!

Let me fix this mess



Ill make it up to you... i swear it

PLEASE!... no more..... its to much to bear



The hell in which im tormented

The pain thats in my eyes



Why do i have to suffer

For all these lies



The line between life and death fades

In comes someone slashing with blades



Down i fall

Never to wake again



Enter into the abyss

All i see and kiss...


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Crituque it plz.....let me know what you think

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Julie White's picture

Very good poem....i think it describes the real thing...it is hard to turn back with no support

nightangel's picture

I find this to be real but far. You have a beautiful gift of words and a talent for making them mesh together in a twizted beauty. Keep up the great work. I have some stuff which is similar please read and let me its called Drugs addiction Good Luck to you in your future writing Jennifer

Tim's picture

Go sean with the poem skills

Meagan Oakes's picture

that's a good poem i like it i read it to one of my friends and i think it helped him see drugs in a different view