Your momma says your stupid
'an everythings falling down
you only do it
to be "in" with the crowd
You think it'll get you some respect
But its killin you inside
you cant go on like this
Theres no place to hide...
Got to get out
before its too late
no one will help you
ain't got no mate
Where have allthe people gone
The ones you thoght were friends
What the fuck is wrong with this
is this the end of me?
I cant see a thing...its so dark
Where has every one gone?
Let me fix this mess
Ill make it up to you... i swear it
PLEASE!... no more..... its to much to bear
The hell in which im tormented
The pain thats in my eyes
Why do i have to suffer
For all these lies
The line between life and death fades
In comes someone slashing with blades
Down i fall
Never to wake again
Enter into the abyss
All i see and kiss...
Very good poem....i think it describes the real thing...it is hard to turn back with no support
I find this to be real but far. You have a beautiful gift of words and a talent for making them mesh together in a twizted beauty. Keep up the great work. I have some stuff which is similar please read and let me its called Drugs addiction Good Luck to you in your future writing Jennifer
Go sean with the poem skills
that's a good poem i like it i read it to one of my friends and i think it helped him see drugs in a different view