We were just talking
Enjoying our stroll
But while we were walking
There stepped in some soul
He pointed a gun
Brought us to disarray
Pulled me aside
Pushed Keith out of the way
A knife was pulled out
Placed against my throat
And while I did not move
I tried to take note
The knife was tightly pressed
Every move would either cut or shoot
And with the limited space I had
I found a possible root
The gun was cocked
My brain was a burst
As he was about to fire
I did what I knew worst
I jolted down
Trying to avoid the blade
Hit him in the groin
But my neck was the price paid
The man went down
And I kicked him again
While holding my throat
I soon felt the pain
I was bleeding profusely
Yielding to unconsciousness
I felt Keith carry me
To the nearest hospital address
I was rushed into the emergency room
While he sat and waited
But when the doctors came out
And this is what they stated
Your wife lost a lot of blood
We tried our best to save her
When she was cut it pierced the main vein
And we weren't able to help any, Sir
However her last words were
Through a gurgled mess of sounds
That she always loved you more
But let you win some of the rounds
And don't go hunting the man
She forgives him
And you should too
Because everything happens for a reason
Where you'll understand that
Moment it comes through
Inspired by: song "Don't Take the Girl"
Created on: June 22, 2006 - 01:23
really enjoyed this one, charged with emotion and a residual sadness really nice thoughtful poem
stay happy
I totally love this poem. I find it very difficult to find a poem that actually tells a story. This, I feel, was very well written and posessed a wonderful rhyme. Though, I didn't under stand the line,
"But let you win some of the rounds"
Anyway, still a great poem. I look forward to reading more of your work.
beautifull poem
Such sadness, such emotion, such a strong moral .. this was a beautiful poem