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are you still here?
you who led me
to the depths
darkest within
deepest swells
Of salty waters
are you still here
To guide me?
floating is becoming
a wilting of skin
we want to learn
how to fly again
are you with me
or against me?
I need to be whole
To complete we
Always with you ready to fly!
Always with you ready to fly! Just a gorgeous piece i wanted so much for it to he written of me xx hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
likely it was
thank you so much
Hugs
© Ground
The final two lines make a
The final two lines make a stunning statement.
Starward
Oh?
Elaborate n your thoughts please
© Ground
Sorry I missed this the first
Sorry I missed this the first time, as I was in the hospital facing a possibly fatal blood sepsis. I was impressed by this poem which ends on"we" acknowledging the presence of another poet. A poet less talented than you (and I think that means most of them) would have stuck with "I"/"me."
Starward
Thank you so much for coming
Thank you so much for coming back to this. I so appreciate the feedback. Sorry to hear about your health! Glad you are okay.
© Ground
Thanks for the reply, and for
Thanks for the reply, and for being understanding about my delay. I am still rather messed up, but the blood sepsis was resolved after five rather nerve-wracking days.
Starward
Wishing you wellness
I apologize for my delay too. May you be blessed with good health.
© Ground
Thank you!
Thank you!
Starward