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Is it me or is it the rest?
Is it my fault or is this a test?

Am I following or following my dream?
Am I a hypocrite or am I being me?

Do I want love or something else?
Something unattainable? Perhaps ego in itself?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is my first "poem" here. I'm not a writer. So please don't laugh!

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©20 January 2012 - 12:22am — GringoStar
20 January 2012 - 3:51am — LitBlackRose
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I started like last month on

I started like last month on this site no one here is gonna laugh n besides I like it

20 January 2012 - 3:58am — GringoStar
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Thank You!

Thank You!

20 January 2012 - 3:37am — Fitzgerald
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This is great. No one is

This is great. No one is going to laugh at you I'm sure of it. I don't consider my self a "writer" either however I do like to write down my thoughts and passed experiences.

20 January 2012 - 3:39am — GringoStar
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Thanks

Thanks Fitzgerald. I appreciate that. Maybe I'll put some more up.

20 January 2012 - 3:41am — Fitzgerald
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Please do.

Please do.

20 January 2012 - 3:45am — GringoStar
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Just did. Thanks again dude.

Just did. Thanks again dude.