Slanted seconds on the river, swimming smooth such a sinner
If thoughts could touch they’d be tender
My woman Whispers like the winter
And the trees do call and summer sings till fall
Autumn brings the chilly breeze on the moonshining silky seas
Emerald mornings, poison nights
Peasants preach the wars of life
Pledging time the hour glass
Last grains moving fast
Blue eyed curse hurts
Not a lighter in her purse
Hold the rain for me
I’m coming home
If The Novel Is This Good
then it's a winner - good luck with the prosing ~allets~