It has all gone to hell
and it all ends tonight
Locked in this shell
Nothing ever seems right
It is all everchanging
and all the good is gone
Life now is torture
and living just seems wrong
Wanting so much,
but the limits just keep growing
I am dying inside,
even though, on the outside, it might not be showing
Taken all I have
There is nothing left
Show me what it is like
To live when you just feel dead
Can you give me a reason,
A reason to stay
When every single thing I do
Seems to push everyone away
Sick of being hurt,
So tired of being used
I have tried to hold on,
but there is nothing inside but a heart that is bruised
It seems to me everything has gone bad
No, nothing is alright
There is no hope in crying alone, so sad
So, it all ends tonight
oh my word! this is great, full of passion. it deffinatly does what i would think its soposed to do which instils fear and worry in the reader.
i certainly hope you don't really kill yourself because you have alot of talent and it would be a shame to never read another one of your poems.