Last Night Of November

I remember...,
I remember that mascara in her eyes
I remember those hidden tears in her sighs
I remember that beautiful night
When her words were the only light
I remember that happy-sad situation
While explaining secrets and humiliation
I remember you gave me motivation
When I was searching for salvation
I remember words of her silent heart
Just in time they fell out apart
I remember it was a sign of a new start
When her words started to impart
I remember how I tried not to show
Feelings floating in my heart below
But how could I let her voice go low?
And I admitted she's the one I love
I remember sun was about to shine
It was almost the morning time
When two innocent hearts made aligned
I remember when her lips touched mine
I remember how she held my hand
She said this love is never gonna end
And I remember that song she sang
Told me to take her to the Neverland
It was the longest night, I remember
Glow of her eyes so bright, I remember
Hearts were yelling, words were quiet, I remember
That kiss in the moonlight, I remember
That warmth of her breath, I remember
Her touch gave me the strength, I remember
Rest of the world was like faint, I remember
I remember, I still remember
That last night of November...

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Jesster's picture

Beautiful and deeply

Beautiful and deeply saddening.


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thanks alot:)

thanks alot:)

lovelife123's picture

Aww this is so cute! :')

Aww this is so cute! :')


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

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Thank you :)

Thank you :)

emmenay's picture

BEAUTIFUL!

Beautiful! Like I said, you have immense talent, so keep it up. Let the poem come naturally. Never force yourself to write. Best of luck.


Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

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Thanks alot :) thats what i

Thanks alot :) thats what i realize every time i write something like this.. :) thank you..

ScarlettLetter's picture

OMG OMG OMg your poetry just

OMG OMG OMg your poetry just flows from one line into the next. I especially love the way you rhyme in your poetry. its pure beauty.


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GOHIL48's picture

thnks alot :) but im kinda

thnks alot :) but im kinda bad at rhyming.. but seeing your comment, i think i have done my best in this one:) thank uuu

ScarlettLetter's picture

ur aweosme

ur aweosme


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allets's picture

U R Very Awesome

U weavea nice telling, my friend. Encore ~ allets


 

 

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haha thanks alot:)

haha thanks alot:)