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Cheesy wish?
Korn Korn Korn Korn
I want to go to sleep now...
Sticky fingers from anonymous sources and random swellings that ache. The korn concert was fucking sick last night. I guess I'm still a little baked. I'm sitting here in english class wishing I could screa what I feel, but if you knew what I was talking about would you still be my friend? for real.
So I keep my feelings inside, right now I'm just a friend. I know if i brought it up right now it would be the end. I hope you aren't reading this out of the corner of your ere, if you brought this up at lunch I swear I'd fucking die. Why do you have to be perfect, why are you what i need? You make me so happy sometimes, you're so much better than weed. I know you have a boufriend, he's nearly 600 pounds. But I keep my mouth shut, I could never go 3 rounds. So many girls around and you're above the rest. Funny, smart, hot as hell, the best of teh best. The Korn concert was dope last night I wanted you to go. I lost my address book with you number in it, makes me feel like a ho. I wish you would finally dump him and jump into my arms, maybe I'm not good enough with my social abilities and charms.
...damn...
There'so such thing as a cheesy wish. I liked it and definently identified with it. I think it would look better in stanza form that way it would be easier to read and people would know it was rthyme and not free verse. Keep up the good workand hope to hear more.
Cheesy? No, it's normal. Good luck :o)