Trapped within this glass enclosure
[from which everyone could watch me,
analyzing my every move amidst heckles],
I pushed forcefully on each door
as I circled through life.
I revolved around
with eyes fixed on the center axle.
Therein contained what drove me forward-
seeing how the doors were joined together;
each bringing me a step closer to the goal.
Or so I thought.
Akin to a hamster wheel,
with every rotation I ended up where I started
The only thing I had to show for it
was some added strength to bear more defeat.
I thought I could overcome my circumstances,
but I was really just circumventing the truth:
there is no hope for me outside
this endless cycle of failure upon failure.
I could never expect to catch up
because I kept falling further behind.
this is a beautiful poem and i read a few others that were wonderfully writting as well. you do a wonderful job with your metaphors. i especially liked the part where you compared it to a hamster wheel :)
im glad you are doing what you enjoy