Amazed
I am amazed by
the way you look.
I am amazed how
beautiful you look.
It is amazing how
we fell in love with
each other.
Amazed how your hand
fits perfectly in mine.
it is amazing that you have
not lost that sparkling
your eyes.
Amazed that you care
for you as
you do.
I amazed that love for
me has grow.
THAT IS AMAZING
AND AMAZED!
-Gene Conner
March 11, 2005
I like it. Is was feeling that way once. But sometimes, it aint meant to be. But I think you have some serious talent there. You made your poem sound real to me. But its really all about how YOU feel. Keepin' up the good work is the best thing to do. So keep up the good work!
Marianna Li:)