in your naked innocence
i adore you
with your giggle flirting
like danger hanging
on a window sill
on a night with only
a sliver of a moon
and the shades drawn
i want to kiss you
on your birthday
i....of course
want to kiss your
naked innocence
and slip my finger
in to your vagabond
desire that travels
beyond words
with your flirty giggle
spinning like bald tires
across the frozen pond
and to keep all this
and only this
between you and i
OH MY!! lol almost as great as the first....i love your words!! they are greatly romantic...and all i can say is i would smack the girl if you never get her....maybe she'll wake up ^.^