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tea
Its fun to hear ice
when it hits hot tea
it cracks and screams
then slowly melts away
Why is it it disappears
in to nowhere
like dad did to mom
and mom did to me
now im cold and left alone
to be swallowed into the unknown .
You show great promise
Your work reminds me of when I first started writing. I admire that you are staying true to yourself, and I love your honesty-- Writing is like personal therapy. Keep writing, stay true, and everything else will follow. I look forward to your future work.
this is really deep, i like
this is really deep, i like how its short but it explains a lot. i feels really emotional, like most of your work, you have a very good way of saturating your poems with feeling, i think you should try to make them longer tho, maybe go into a bit more detail yea?
~Grass is green~ <^>
i think i should try to make
i think i should try to make it longer.... but once i have a poem in my head i ether cant think of any way to change it or else I will change to much of the poem to were its completely different
day dreamer
that happens to me often, it
that happens to me often, it is a hard process, i am just barely gettin the hang of it lol if im getting the hang of it at all :)
~Grass is green~ <^>