TWO MOPS HANGING (UNRHYMED FIVERSE)

 

I

can see

two mops hanging

over a metal fence

engaged in a peaceful chat




 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

a scene from 3oth Street Station.

 

 

 

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KingofWords's picture

Nice

So picturesque and realistic. :) 

georgeschaefer's picture

Thank you.  I really have to

Thank you.  I really have to learn how to put pictures in here.  This one was inspired by a photograph I took on the platform at 30th Street Station in Philadelphia.

allets's picture

Chatting Mop Heads

Sounds like a name for a Rock Group - cool - slc


 

 

georgeschaefer's picture

We tried it out and lasted

We tried it out and lasted about as long as the Peanut Butter Conspiracy.

Morningglory's picture

Nice

I like this. It should also be a painting. 


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georgeschaefer's picture

There is a picture that goes

There is a picture that goes with the poem.  I just don't know how to upload pictures on the site.

Morningglory's picture

If you can

If you put the picture online somewhere then you could at least share the link to the image


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It's on my facebook page:

It's on my facebook page:  https://www.facebook.com/george.schaefer.39  

You may have to scroll down to get to it.

sonnysblueridge's picture

i really like this

i really like this

georgeschaefer's picture

thank you.  Check out King of

thank you.  Check out King of Words.  He's the originator of the fiverse style.